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What's going on?

October 20, 2010
By katibug919 BRONZE, Red House, West Virginia
katibug919 BRONZE, Red House, West Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"Me? Sarcastic? Im way to ditzy to grasp the concept of mockery"


I never thought I’d see the day,
When you would get tired of me.
I just wanted to be that perfect girl.
I tried so hard to be.

You tell me your confused about us.
You tell me you just don’t know.
It makes me feel like you never care,
About the love I’ve tried to show.

I cried last night and the night before,
Cause you weren’t there to hold.
I don’t understand why you feel this way.
Is our relationship getting old?

Please don’t make me suffer.
Please tell me from the start.
Is there another girl you talk to?
Did she steal away your heart?

I want so bad to be like we were,
When you loved me with no doubt.
When, love, kindness and honesty,
Was what our relationship was about.

I’m so scared of losing you.
I can’t handle being apart.
Just know even if you don’t want me,
You will always have my heart



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TAR11 SILVER said...
on Jul. 15 2011 at 8:43 am
TAR11 SILVER, Allison Park, Pennsylvania
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Cool poem.  Please check out mine From the Hilltop and Anonymous' Inferno. 

on Nov. 10 2010 at 1:50 pm
fatesknocking GOLD, Solon, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
Prayers go up and blessings come down.

you're an amazing writer. i can relate completely. i love this so much.

on Nov. 9 2010 at 12:30 pm
CountryGothic GOLD, Somersworth, New Hampshire
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Favorite Quote:
"Once something has been said, it cannot be said in other words." -Aristotle

Lovely poem that you have here, I like the desperation of the narrator...A+