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Unfinished Love Confession MAG
Heart thumps
thudding with purpose
beating like a drum
through my rib cage
making my vision blur
my world is tilting
all because of three little words
“I love you.”
Focusing intently
on the simple task
of breathing
© Anonymous
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This article has 26 comments.
JamezRulz813 said...
on Sep. 3 2008 at 12:13 am
Wow. That was really well written. Keep writing it makes life worth living
quilty of confessions said...
on Aug. 26 2008 at 7:31 pm
That was really good. Like, I've been trying to say that for a really long time, but I couldn't find the words to do so. Thank you for showing me the words.
neslyn08 said...
on Aug. 13 2008 at 8:09 pm
thats really cute.
short.sweet. to the point.Good Job.
short.sweet. to the point.Good Job.
isaly44 said...
on Aug. 9 2008 at 4:04 am
i loved it...u described exactly what ive been trying to put into words but couldnt seen to get it to come out right
Michael the Mentalist said...
on Aug. 6 2008 at 5:42 am
*sparse applause from the crowd* pretty good you could work on your rhythm a little bit though. In other words the gradation of syllables is to abrupt but all in all not bad
courtneexox said...
on Aug. 5 2008 at 11:15 pm
I no how this feels and u describe it soooo well!
