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Look My Flower

October 12, 2010
By echome94 PLATINUM, Daleville, Virginia
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echome94 PLATINUM, Daleville, Virginia
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When the world around me ceases to exist and then i will open up and let a cruel man like you in<br /> <br /> <br /> ~Unknown~

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Look my flower
Time is short
Dont look back
Your not that sort
Petals have fallen
Only one left
He loves me
He loves me not
He loves me
He loves me no

© Kathleen S., Maumee, OH

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This article has 5 comments.

ThePeaceDaisy BRONZE said...
on Nov. 8 2011 at 8:49 pm
ThePeaceDaisy BRONZE, Albany, New York
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&ldquo;Laundry is the only thing that should be separated by color.&rdquo; - Unknown<br /> I will change this every week!

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She had to do the 'DOES not NEED to be criticized'
S M Wells said...
on Feb. 7 2011 at 3:25 pm
Had to do what?
AngelForeverBleedingLove DIAMOND said...
on Feb. 7 2011 at 12:16 pm
AngelForeverBleedingLove DIAMOND, Frederic, Wisconsin
65 articles 3 photos 248 comments

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You say you don&#039;t remember,<br /> But I will never forget

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SMWells is right... Your poem DOES not NEED to be criticized, it is quite amazing, and I love it! (ha ha ha sorry I had to do it)

-Angel

SMWells PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 31 2010 at 2:48 pm
SMWells PLATINUM, Carlisle, South Carolina
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Some truths best left unspoken.

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Your poem dose not kneed criticized!
echome94 PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 25 2010 at 3:06 pm
echome94 PLATINUM, Daleville, Virginia
32 articles 3 photos 46 comments

Favorite Quote:
When the world around me ceases to exist and then i will open up and let a cruel man like you in<br /> <br /> <br /> ~Unknown~

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Feel free to criticize anything i've written. This is based on a silly thing that us girls do every once and a while. I tried to weave my feelings for my ex at the time into it