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Moving On's Warning Lable

August 2, 2010
By MelanieLouise PLATINUM, Plymouth, Minnesota
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MelanieLouise PLATINUM, Plymouth, Minnesota
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to live a creative life, we must lose our fear of being wrong

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living each day
and being forced into thinking
can cause discomfort

thinking of my future
looking beyond yesterday
can cause alarm

having to replay my imagery
from end to beginning
can cause memories

remembering to breathe in and out
to stay alive
can cause restlessness

picking up the pieces
the pieces of who i was
can cause pain

thinking, living, looking, replaying, remembering, and picking
can be thoughtfully draining.

© David D., Apple Valley, MN

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how hard is it to move on and not look back?
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luckypachyderm SILVER said...
on Aug. 27 2010 at 1:14 am
luckypachyderm SILVER, Medford, Oregon
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Imperfection is beauty, madness is genius, and it is better to be absolutely ridiculous than absolutely boring- Marlyn Monroe

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I really like the last stanza. Very good job on this one :)

Two of my peices just got published. Would you mind taking a look?