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Did I Make You Look? MAG

July 15, 2010
By Anonymous

Do you know what I did for you tonight?
I sat for hours, curling my hair,
Making sure every little ringlet
Fell, twisting in a perfect spiral,
Bouncing in a perfect curl.
I wore lipstick for the first time,
Although I think I may have licked
All of it off by now.
I read how to do my make-up
Like famous actresses do,
So maybe I'd be able to impress you.
I saved my money for months
To buy this dress
Because I want you to notice me.
I spent the past week
Putting my feet through murder,
Learning how to walk in these heels
So I could dance in them …
Maybe with you?
I painted my nails,
Spending two whole hours,
Making sure each coat was perfect.
So that you'd see me
And you'd look twice.



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on Feb. 8 2011 at 1:55 pm
butchkarlb BRONZE, Easley, South Carolina
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I totally agree with what LoveAndWar said. This poem was amazing and I can definitely idetnify with where you are coming from. I also agree with the fact that I sense a hint of sadness within it. But either way it's lovely (:

on Feb. 6 2011 at 10:44 am
LoveAndWar GOLD, Encinitas, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Better to be the witty fool than the foolish wit" -Feste, Shakespeare

I'm sure this is something we can all identify with... at least us girls. It's an amazing poem, it really is, and it has a sad tinge to it, if I'm correct. 

on Feb. 3 2011 at 4:17 pm
Kristine PLATINUM, Edmond, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
"You've got to love what you've got while you've got it."

This is really cute!  Good job!  Nice descriptions!!