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My Only Savior

July 11, 2010
By MercedesXO DIAMOND, South Easton, Massachusetts
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MercedesXO DIAMOND, South Easton, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;I realize that life is risks. It&#039;s acknowledging the past but looking forward. It&#039;s taking chances that we will make mistakes but believeing we all deserve to be forgiven.&quot; <br /> -The Dead Tossed Waves.

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All I want
Is to hate the world
Everything that is in it
I long to destroy it.
I feel the need to crush
Torment and abuse
Everything that should
Leave me dying and confused
I wish to go along with it
To destroy it and jump in for the ride
I never want to return
Not when it has soothed what once cried
Death stole it all away
He gobbled it up and erased it
Death is my only savior
The one to which will replace this
My completely messed up life
And everything that remain inside
He has to and will restore
What was rightfully mine
I long to see the day
That I will escape all abuses
I fight to remain breathing
Even as I'm dying to prove this
I'm tired of fighting these battles
That no one could ever win
I strive to remain untouched
Even if I'm dying to give in
I'm fighting for something
That merrily does not exist
A life worthy of living
Unconditional loves true kiss.

© Melanie R., Milpitas, CA

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This article has 5 comments.

MariaMarie DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 15 2010 at 9:00 pm
MariaMarie DIAMOND, Washington Court House, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Life&#039;s a mountain on a beach&quot;-Unknown<br /> &quot;Will: This is either madness or brilliance. Sparrow: It&#039;s remarkable how often those two traits coincide.&quot;-Pirates of the Caribbean:Curse of the Black Pearl.

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Np  :)
MercedesXO DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 13 2010 at 12:33 am
MercedesXO DIAMOND, South Easton, Massachusetts
52 articles 0 photos 280 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I realize that life is risks. It&#039;s acknowledging the past but looking forward. It&#039;s taking chances that we will make mistakes but believeing we all deserve to be forgiven.&quot; <br /> -The Dead Tossed Waves.

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LOL. thank you. honestly, i've read through a few of your pieces and was completely taken aback by YOUR talent. like, you really really have talent. and i appriciate your comments:) and you viewing my work. i love to hear what others think. and considering its 1:32 am..i'm planning to go to bed soon. but i will MOST DEFFINITELY be back to view wayy more of your work tomorrow. i cannot wait:) lol. i love your writing. and thanks again!
MercedesXO DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 13 2010 at 12:29 am
MercedesXO DIAMOND, South Easton, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;I realize that life is risks. It&#039;s acknowledging the past but looking forward. It&#039;s taking chances that we will make mistakes but believeing we all deserve to be forgiven.&quot; <br /> -The Dead Tossed Waves.

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thank you soo much. its greatly appriciated!
sleeplessdreamer PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 12 2010 at 9:55 am
sleeplessdreamer PLATINUM, Raleigh, North Carolina
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&quot;I have always wanted to write in such a way that people say, &#039;I have always thought that but never found the words for it.&#039;&quot; -anonymous

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I may have to stop commenting on your work, because all I can say is how great it is... fabulous once again. Great job. 
MariaMarie DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 6 2010 at 9:49 pm
MariaMarie DIAMOND, Washington Court House, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Life&#039;s a mountain on a beach&quot;-Unknown<br /> &quot;Will: This is either madness or brilliance. Sparrow: It&#039;s remarkable how often those two traits coincide.&quot;-Pirates of the Caribbean:Curse of the Black Pearl.

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Wow.. this is.. really really good and deep. I think i would have been able to relate to this very well about three yrs ago.. The word choice is very good also