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July 23, 2010
By VickyLove92 PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
VickyLove92 PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
41 articles 0 photos 71 comments

Favorite Quote:
once life gets harsh/hard, hold your head strong because that's all you can do


The built up of walls
Cautious steps
Fighting the uneven wrinkles
On my clothes
Perfection is the show
Is the performance I adore to show you?
The secrecy
Suddenly collapses since a month ago
Words spoken from you
Leads me to feel out of place
In this world
To know I’m insecure with the person
I live with twenty four seven
Spencer, you speak the truth
A fear to deserve more than a fling
A clear view of insecurity
Unknown of cherishing one person
More than a heart to beat
Afraid of love and pain
Elements I lived without for months
Neglecting my heart
To once fall for one person
Who’ll be my center of my world?


The author's comments:
a feeling in which isn't too great but until u find that one person who will reopen your eyes to love. like i have

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on Aug. 3 2010 at 10:00 am
VickyLove92 PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
41 articles 0 photos 71 comments

Favorite Quote:
once life gets harsh/hard, hold your head strong because that's all you can do

awwww thank you very much

on Aug. 3 2010 at 12:18 am
KirstynAlexandra PLATINUM, Baltimore, Maryland
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\&quot;I\&#039;m selfish, impatient and a little insecure. I make mistakes, I am out of control and at times hard to handle. But if you can\&#039;t handle me at my worst, then you sure as hell don\&#039;t deserve me at my best.\&quot;<br /> &mdash; Marilyn Monroe<br /> <br /> Imagination is more important than knowledge...<br /> Albert Einstein

i think this is great :)

on Aug. 1 2010 at 12:57 pm
VickyLove92 PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
41 articles 0 photos 71 comments

Favorite Quote:
once life gets harsh/hard, hold your head strong because that&#039;s all you can do

awwwwww thank you..it mean alot but i will check out ur stuff. thankz:)

on Aug. 1 2010 at 9:26 am
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
14 articles 0 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
\&quot;either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin<br /> <br /> \&quot;If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\&quot; <br /> <br /> \&quot;If music be the food of love, play on.\&quot;

Wow you did an awesome job with this:) i really, really like this. It had such a good structure! please check out some of my work if you get the chance:)

on Jul. 28 2010 at 9:43 am
VickyLove92 PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
41 articles 0 photos 71 comments

Favorite Quote:
once life gets harsh/hard, hold your head strong because that&#039;s all you can do

awww thank you n i will:) it means alot

on Jul. 28 2010 at 9:42 am
VickyLove92 PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
41 articles 0 photos 71 comments

Favorite Quote:
once life gets harsh/hard, hold your head strong because that&#039;s all you can do

awwww thank you...ill really do mean it.

on Jul. 27 2010 at 1:50 pm
ChuzzyBear BRONZE, Mapleton Depot, Pennsylvania
3 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;You have my heart in your hands please dont drop it; its been reglued alot but I think its holding now.&quot;-my boyfriend

I think you did an amazing job writing this

on Jul. 27 2010 at 10:47 am
Hannahgee6 BRONZE, Greensburg, Kentucky
1 article 0 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
therefore do not worry about tomorrow. for tomorrow will worry about itself. each day has enough trouble of its own.<br /> -jesus

this is really good!!! please keep writing!! :) check out my work. :)b