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July 23, 2010
By VickyLove92 PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
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VickyLove92 PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
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once life gets harsh/hard, hold your head strong because that's all you can do

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The built up of walls
Cautious steps
Fighting the uneven wrinkles
On my clothes
Perfection is the show
Is the performance I adore to show you?
The secrecy
Suddenly collapses since a month ago
Words spoken from you
Leads me to feel out of place
In this world
To know I’m insecure with the person
I live with twenty four seven
Spencer, you speak the truth
A fear to deserve more than a fling
A clear view of insecurity
Unknown of cherishing one person
More than a heart to beat
Afraid of love and pain
Elements I lived without for months
Neglecting my heart
To once fall for one person
Who’ll be my center of my world?

© Sarah S., Winter Park, FL

The author's comments:
a feeling in which isn't too great but until u find that one person who will reopen your eyes to love. like i have
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VickyLove92 PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 3 2010 at 10:00 am
VickyLove92 PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
41 articles 0 photos 71 comments

Favorite Quote:
once life gets harsh/hard, hold your head strong because that's all you can do

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awwww thank you very much
KirstynAlexandra PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 3 2010 at 12:18 am
KirstynAlexandra PLATINUM, Baltimore, Maryland
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\&quot;I\&#039;m selfish, impatient and a little insecure. I make mistakes, I am out of control and at times hard to handle. But if you can\&#039;t handle me at my worst, then you sure as hell don\&#039;t deserve me at my best.\&quot;<br /> &mdash; Marilyn Monroe<br /> <br /> Imagination is more important than knowledge...<br /> Albert Einstein

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i think this is great :)
VickyLove92 PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 1 2010 at 12:57 pm
VickyLove92 PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
41 articles 0 photos 71 comments

Favorite Quote:
once life gets harsh/hard, hold your head strong because that&#039;s all you can do

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awwwwww thank you..it mean alot but i will check out ur stuff. thankz:)
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD said...
on Aug. 1 2010 at 9:26 am
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
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\&quot;either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin<br /> <br /> \&quot;If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\&quot; <br /> <br /> \&quot;If music be the food of love, play on.\&quot;

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Wow you did an awesome job with this:) i really, really like this. It had such a good structure! please check out some of my work if you get the chance:)
VickyLove92 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 28 2010 at 9:43 am
VickyLove92 PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
41 articles 0 photos 71 comments

Favorite Quote:
once life gets harsh/hard, hold your head strong because that&#039;s all you can do

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awww thank you n i will:) it means alot
VickyLove92 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 28 2010 at 9:42 am
VickyLove92 PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
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once life gets harsh/hard, hold your head strong because that&#039;s all you can do

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awwww thank you...ill really do mean it.
ChuzzyBear BRONZE said...
on Jul. 27 2010 at 1:50 pm
ChuzzyBear BRONZE, Mapleton Depot, Pennsylvania
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&quot;You have my heart in your hands please dont drop it; its been reglued alot but I think its holding now.&quot;-my boyfriend

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I think you did an amazing job writing this
Hannahgee6 BRONZE said...
on Jul. 27 2010 at 10:47 am
Hannahgee6 BRONZE, Greensburg, Kentucky
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therefore do not worry about tomorrow. for tomorrow will worry about itself. each day has enough trouble of its own.<br /> -jesus

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this is really good!!! please keep writing!! :) check out my work. :)b