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Clocking Love

June 30, 2010
By Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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&quot;If you love life, don&#039;t waste time, for time is what life is<br /> made up of.&quot;<br /> <br /> -- Bruce Lee

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The insistent beating of my heart
Incessantly ticking like a clock.
Filling every silence
Thump-Thump Tick Tock Tick Tock.

Somehow you stole the stopwatch
Counting the beats of my heart.
You push all the wrong buttons
And slow my pulse when we're apart.

But every time I see you
Time rushes by too fast.
With my accelerated heart rate
Too soon present becomes past.

Other times I see you
And time itself stands still.
My heart shudders under your touch
And pumps blood newly fueled by thrill.

It's the perfect moments spent with you,
Whether fleeting or blissfully long
That bring a smile to my lips
And keep my heartbeat strong.

© Aaron S., New City, NY

The author's comments:
This is one of my poems that took a lot of tweaking. I think I finally got it. :P Hope you like it!
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Alcanno DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 13 2010 at 10:07 am
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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&quot;If you love life, don&#039;t waste time, for time is what life is<br /> made up of.&quot;<br /> <br /> -- Bruce Lee

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Thank you, I really appreciate the positive feedback!
bound4life4ever PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 30 2010 at 9:28 am
bound4life4ever PLATINUM, Jamaica, New York
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well the tweaking def. worked cuz its amazing as always;-)
ellyncannon PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 22 2010 at 2:04 pm
ellyncannon PLATINUM, Mexia, Texas
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                       wow. I can't think of anything to say. It's so perfect. The words just fit and it's like I'm in that situation. Really great! Love it! :))))) <3
poeticspirit12334 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 21 2010 at 2:36 pm
poeticspirit12334 PLATINUM, Groesbeck, Texas
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WOW O WOW~!!!!~ THIS IS SOOOOO GREAT I LOVE THIS ITS RELATABLE   LOV YA AL!!
Alcanno DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 21 2010 at 12:36 pm
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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&quot;If you love life, don&#039;t waste time, for time is what life is<br /> made up of.&quot;<br /> <br /> -- Bruce Lee

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hanks so much for your comment! Relatability is one thing I always hope to accomplish through my poetry, so your comment means a lot!
lauraclaire848 said...
on Jul. 21 2010 at 11:26 am
lauraclaire848, Suffolk, Virginia
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I love this! I think that the third verse ("But every time I see you...") is so relatable and that's fantastic. It immediately made me go back to all of the moments I've had when "Too soon the present becomes the past." Thank you for sharing!