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June 19, 2010
By hazle1eyes SILVER, Greenfield, New Hampshire
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The sun is so bright it light's up the night, big bold and yellow its like a friendly fellow. It shimmers down upon me waiting anxiously, for night to come once again so i can pray for thee. As I sleep at night, I dreem about the sun. Oh how it makes me feel, like i want to have fun. Waking up once again, I ran out fast to see. The sun was out in the sky, staring back at me.

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what inspired me to writ this poem was one night befor I went to sleep after a very long boring day. I was hoping to make up for it with a full day of fun in the sun. Ther hadent been much color to go around. personaly i felt there was a dim indivisible cloud structure stuck over head. so I woke up the next morning to the sun big and bold and yellow. with the satisfaction of a perfict day filled with fun, smiles, and laughter.
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Healing_angel said...
on Jul. 18 2010 at 1:05 am
Short, but bright. So cheerful! :)
crubs33 DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 15 2010 at 12:08 am
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
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This is really good!! i can feel the emotion!!! its really light and cheerful!!! if you could please rate and comment my work that would be great!! thanks and u r really good dont stop!!!