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the sun and the moon

June 12, 2010
By woundedcondor GOLD, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
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the sun is a god
the moon is a goddess
the stars are their children
they sacrifice their lives to give us light
the only time they see each other is during eclipses...you are the sun and i am the moon...and this is our...fate...

© Emma C., Gardner, MA

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this poem is dedicated to my friend/s who just graduated.
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woundedcondor GOLD said...
on Nov. 9 2010 at 8:33 pm
woundedcondor GOLD, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
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omg thanks u so much
Lay18 PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 7 2010 at 5:55 pm
Lay18 PLATINUM, Portsmouth, Virginia
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Amazing poem
woundedcondor GOLD said...
on Aug. 29 2010 at 7:09 pm
woundedcondor GOLD, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
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omg thank u
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on Aug. 29 2010 at 2:33 pm
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Very well written! It has a very interesting theme, and I loved reading it. I applaud you for it.
woundedcondor GOLD said...
on Aug. 29 2010 at 12:11 pm
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lol thx ;]
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Wow! Very good! You have such an interesting way of looking at things! Pat yourself on the back! :-)
woundedcondor GOLD said...
on Aug. 15 2010 at 12:06 am
woundedcondor GOLD, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
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xxD thanks ;]
Boosflash DIAMOND said...
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when i first started reading this I was like "yeah, whatever", but when i read the last line I was lke" yeah, there goes the monkey." very nice captain.