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It Goes On

May 25, 2010
By PoeticTouch GOLD, Saida, Other
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Learn from yesterday, live for today, hope for tomorrow

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The sun rises to shine the light on our pure innocent love
The rain falls to wash away our melancholy
The birds sing to show the rhyme of our single beating heart
Trees grow to show the growing of our long lasting love and that it goes on...

© Amanda M., Coventry, RI

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PoeticTouch GOLD said...
on Aug. 8 2010 at 8:36 am
PoeticTouch GOLD, Saida, Other
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thank youu!:)
PoeticTouch GOLD said...
on Aug. 5 2010 at 5:51 am
PoeticTouch GOLD, Saida, Other
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thankssss!! glad you like it!!:)
Chloe_ BRONZE said...
on Aug. 4 2010 at 10:50 pm
Chloe_ BRONZE, San Antonio, Texas
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Wow that like lingers in your mind even after you've finished reading it!
Bigbirdocho SILVER said...
on Aug. 4 2010 at 9:15 am
Bigbirdocho SILVER, Kent, Connecticut
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yea

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nicely written
PoeticTouch GOLD said...
on Jul. 27 2010 at 8:15 am
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thank youuu sooo much, appreciate the comment...:)
jessica.cherish.conner GOLD said...
on Jul. 26 2010 at 6:17 pm
jessica.cherish.conner GOLD, Elk Grove, California
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This is so short yet you continue to think about it, and there for it remains long. Its sweet and close to perfect. Great job.
PoeticTouch GOLD said...
on Jul. 13 2010 at 7:43 am
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thank youu so much:) i reallyy appreciate ur opinion, and ofcourse i would check out ur work:)
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD said...
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Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
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wow this is really powerful!!! awesome job this is really good!! i just really love how you wrote this-beautiful poem:) please check out some of my work when you get the chance:)