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June 2, 2010
By Kittycorn_of_Dolphinia SILVER, Miamisburg, Ohio
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I make this promise now,
To love you forever.
My heart is gold,
My heart is yours.
I'll hold you close in the darkest hours
And wait for the light to show your precious smile.

© Jennae P., Kennewick, WA

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Kittycorn_of_Dolphinia SILVER said...
on Oct. 26 2010 at 6:56 am
Kittycorn_of_Dolphinia SILVER, Miamisburg, Ohio
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Sophie I understand where you are coming from and we are all entitled to our opinions. So no it is not fake but I can understand why it sounds that way. I am sorry that I added to the headache of love poems.
ThatClarinetPerson SILVER said...
on Oct. 16 2010 at 9:11 am
ThatClarinetPerson SILVER, Tequesta, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Life. Don&#039;t talk to me about life.&quot;<br /> ~Marvin the Paranoid Android (from the Hitchhiker&#039;s guide to the galaxy series)<br /> Statistical analysis suggests that i am probably in tune with someone<br /> (hahahahaha! I love this cause i&#039;m never ever ever in tune &gt;o

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well, there's a lot of this love stuff published, which is part of it. um, i'm really really sorry if it isn't but it seems kind of.....fake?
Kittycorn_of_Dolphinia SILVER said...
on Oct. 15 2010 at 7:40 pm
Kittycorn_of_Dolphinia SILVER, Miamisburg, Ohio
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what don't you like about it Sophie?
ThatClarinetPerson SILVER said...
on Oct. 2 2010 at 10:55 am
ThatClarinetPerson SILVER, Tequesta, Florida
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&quot;Life. Don&#039;t talk to me about life.&quot;<br /> ~Marvin the Paranoid Android (from the Hitchhiker&#039;s guide to the galaxy series)<br /> Statistical analysis suggests that i am probably in tune with someone<br /> (hahahahaha! I love this cause i&#039;m never ever ever in tune &gt;o

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i dont know. it's kind of meh. :/
Kittycorn_of_Dolphinia SILVER said...
on Oct. 1 2010 at 9:05 am
Kittycorn_of_Dolphinia SILVER, Miamisburg, Ohio
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Thank you    
HeatherBee BRONZE said...
on Sep. 30 2010 at 7:35 pm
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awwww :) that was very sweet. ur word choice was cute too!
Kittycorn_of_Dolphinia SILVER said...
on Sep. 25 2010 at 8:30 pm
Kittycorn_of_Dolphinia SILVER, Miamisburg, Ohio
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Thanks David:) I think I shall stick to poetry and leave the stories to you and the experts
Ceneteros2804 PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 25 2010 at 8:05 pm
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&quot;Great spirits have always found violent opposition from mediocre minds.&#039; Albert Einstein<br /> <br /> &#039;Why write about reality, we all know how that story ends&#039; Me

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Wow this is really good.  It really shows true emotion