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The Girl That Cried Suicide

June 2, 2010
By Sileron-evol PLATINUM, Providence, Rhode Island
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Sileron-evol PLATINUM, Providence, Rhode Island
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"we are captives of our own identities, living in prisons of our own creation"

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I hear people talk behind my back
They think I can’t hear there whispers
I hold back my tears
I grab my books to only have them knock them down
I glide out of the cramped classroom, and let my dark hair cover my face and thoughts


Home is hell
I’m the oldest
I sometimes think that I’m the adult, the parent
Babies crying, screaming, destroying my clear thoughts
Mother sits on the table, drinking pulling out needles
I look at her with despair, trying to show the hurt and pain I have through my eyes
Dad, never home
“Working” is his excuse

Finally, the night
Where the silence is my music
Where the wind whispers my thoughts
And where the darkness is my light

Tears roll down my face
I place the rope around my neck
I’m on my tiptoes,
My tears sound like breaking glass as they crash against the wooden floor
The rope feels like fire on my skin,
But the feel of it is relieving my pain
I take my last breath,
And
Jump.

© Eveliz V., Bayamon, Puerto Rico

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Sileron-evol PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 14 2010 at 2:33 pm
Sileron-evol PLATINUM, Providence, Rhode Island
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"we are captives of our own identities, living in prisons of our own creation"

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Lol, thank yhuuu :)

 

Sileron-evol PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 14 2010 at 2:32 pm
Sileron-evol PLATINUM, Providence, Rhode Island
44 articles 0 photos 98 comments

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"we are captives of our own identities, living in prisons of our own creation"

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Im glad yhu liked iht :)
DancerBabe SILVER said...
on Sep. 11 2010 at 11:18 pm
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That was really good! it gave me goose bumps!
crubs33 DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 8 2010 at 4:24 pm
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&quot;The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud.&quot;- Coco Chanel<br /> Life isn&#039;t about surviving the storm, it&#039;s about learning to dance in the rain.

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Wow i can so feel the emotion
Sileron-evol PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 13 2010 at 12:27 pm
Sileron-evol PLATINUM, Providence, Rhode Island
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THANK YOU SO MUCH! :)
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on Jul. 13 2010 at 12:10 pm
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Love it, keep up the great work
Sileron-evol PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 7 2010 at 12:17 pm
Sileron-evol PLATINUM, Providence, Rhode Island
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No ihts not, iht just came too me i guess
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on Jul. 5 2010 at 9:33 pm
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brilliant! it gave me goose bumps... wow.. is it a true story? in some one else's perspective?
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This is a beautiful intreging piece of work. Bravo! Keep up the work and maybe check out some of mine sometime =)