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May 21, 2010
By Soccer33 SILVER, Niwot, Colorado
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It takes determination to win, but to be a true soccer player you must have true passion for the game.

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The most beautiful scene that I have experienced is when that sun is setting over the hills and you’re sitting in your boat with your fishing pole dangling out the side. Quietly so quietly. Then when you see the sun’s rays on the lake just right that, the lake seems to turn red, yellow, and orange all at the same time. When you hear the birds settling down to go to sleep, the last fish jumps, and you feel a gentle breeze against your face. You know that, that is the only time and the only place that you will be able to experience that beautiful scene.

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HeatherBee BRONZE said...
on Jun. 26 2010 at 9:02 am
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
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Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper<br /> <br /> Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

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aww that felt so soothing n relaxing:DDD i loved your descriptions n word choice^^ it had greeat imagery
Jazzy said...
on Jun. 16 2010 at 10:39 am
Your poems were beautiful and heart felt.  Keep writing sweetie...GramJ