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May 11, 2010
By sydelle PLATINUM, Estacada, Oregon
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sydelle PLATINUM, Estacada, Oregon
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"And I fear not what man can do; for perfect love casteth out all fear..."

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Youth beckons me
To sunlit paths
And electrifying nights
All contagious and burning
With vibrant colors
And tangible vigor
Sizzling in the hot summer haze
Where two people are one
In heart
In mind
In hands
And the promise of forever
Still burns upon my lips

© Brian M.

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The feeling of first love is something no one is likely to ever forget
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sydelle PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 17 2010 at 6:45 pm
sydelle PLATINUM, Estacada, Oregon
26 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
"And I fear not what man can do; for perfect love casteth out all fear..."

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Thanks =] I tried really hard to portray the excitement that comes with new love =] I hope you were able to feel that.
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD said...
on Jun. 17 2010 at 8:15 am
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
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\&quot;either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin<br /> <br /> \&quot;If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\&quot; <br /> <br /> \&quot;If music be the food of love, play on.\&quot;

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wow great poem!! i really like this!!!  my fav. part is the last two lines!!! wow!! please check out some of my work when you get the chance!!!