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Can you hear it?

May 14, 2010
By DaylightDarkness SILVER, Littleton, Colorado
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DaylightDarkness SILVER, Littleton, Colorado
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Everyone's crazy. You know why? We all want to be normal. Well, we cant define normal, and, the people you can point at and say, well isn't he/she normal are rare. Doesnt that kind of defeat the pupose of normal? -My Friend

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Can you hear it beating?
The hole in my chest-
That comes alive
To burn a brand across my sight and mind
Every time you meet my eyes

Is this love,
This eternal mix of pleasure and pain-
The games,
The frightful way, I’m always afraid,
You win me with a glance,
And I can no longer look away.

Is this longing,
The fire consuming me?
The sparkle of brilliant light I see in your eyes
The tickle on my skin.
You stole my heart with a whisper-
And what is my mind to disagree?

Can you hear it beating?
I can.

© Julia K., Nagykovacsi, Hungary

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Hazel-daisy GOLD said...
on Jul. 28 2011 at 7:31 pm
Hazel-daisy GOLD, --, Other
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It takes a lot of courage to show your dreams to someone else - Erna Bombeck<br /> <br /> In three words i can sum up everything I&#039;ve learned in life: it goes on -Robert Frost<br /> <br /> Live, Love, Laugh - ______<br /> <br /> Hope, Love, breathe &lt;3 - Me

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this is really goood, a lot of feeling in it. I'm still trying to decide if i like the last like or not, i can't really decide but maybe thats a good thing! the poem leaves me wondering, which i like :)
Delictious GOLD said...
on Jul. 23 2011 at 10:34 am
Delictious GOLD, Lubbock, Texas
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That was really nice. I like how you didn't really go and say what you were talking about, it kept a kind of mystery even though we all knew what it was. Also, the last lines are the perfect way to end the piece! This is very good!
CarrieAnn13 GOLD said...
on Jul. 22 2011 at 10:36 pm
CarrieAnn13 GOLD, Goodsoil, Other
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&quot;I love deadlines. I like the whooshing sound they make as they fly by.&quot; --Douglas Adams<br /> <br /> &quot;The object of life is not to be on the side of the majority, but to escape finding oneself in the ranks of the insane.&quot; --Marcus Aurelius

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I agree with hanging_girl_666, this should be in the magazine.  It's really beautiful!  Your excellent vocabulary serves you well. :)
DaylightDarkness SILVER said...
on Jul. 21 2011 at 11:29 pm
DaylightDarkness SILVER, Littleton, Colorado
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Thanks! I'm glad you like it!
TheHangingGirl BRONZE said...
on Jul. 21 2011 at 11:23 pm
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THATS AMAZING! THAT SHOULD BE IN THE MAGAZINE !! Oh my goodness im tearing up! I relate so much its not even funny! Inspiring and poetic and so much more. Oh my goodness astounding! Heart wrenching!