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Losing control

May 1, 2010
By sam013 DIAMOND, San Diego, California
sam013 DIAMOND, San Diego, California
63 articles 28 photos 33 comments

Open up my head
Falling through like quicksand
Slipping through my fingers
Hope this feeling doesn’t linger
Losing my control, I can’t command



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TNT25 SILVER said...
on May. 24 2010 at 4:04 pm
TNT25 SILVER, Johnstown, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"Pain is just weakness leaving the body"

good. the only suggestion i have is maybe make it a little longer.

sam013 DIAMOND said...
on May. 23 2010 at 5:31 pm
sam013 DIAMOND, San Diego, California
63 articles 28 photos 33 comments
supposed to be open up my hand...