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The sun you shall be....

April 10, 2010
By Darley SILVER, Meadow Vista, California
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Darley SILVER, Meadow Vista, California
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" What matters most is how you see yourself."

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You make me smile, you make me laugh
You are the sun in my eyes, it burns to look at you in the eye

But your rays calm me down, there is nothing better than you sun
Your hot soul completes me, without you I would be dead, so promise to come out every day
To blow my mind away, you are my sun…

© Kim B., Marblehead, MA

The author's comments:
I like this guy at my school and when ever i look at him he fills my heart with warmth and yet happiness.
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