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March 22, 2010
By Whisperer PLATINUM, O&#39Fallon, Illinois
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Whisperer PLATINUM, O&#39Fallon, Illinois
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I&#039;d rather be hated for who i am, than loved for who I&#039;m not~Anonymous<br /> <br /> No individual has any right to come into and out of this world without leaving distinct and legit reasons for having passed through.~Anonymous

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These feelings
They envelope me
And drag me down


Down



Down
I cannot stop this worrying
That puts me in a frown

Drowning in the silence
The emotion, the pain
What I wouldn’t give
Just to be a child again

The pain that you are causing
The suffering and despair
They slip into the darkness
And follow on from there

And when I’m all alone
I never feel as blue
As when I share the moments
I used to share with you

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one day, i was feeling down, so i decided to try and explain the feelings.
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RheaD.Ravenfinger BRONZE said...
on Apr. 16 2010 at 7:44 pm
RheaD.Ravenfinger BRONZE, Juneau, Alaska
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I like your poem. I relate to it because sometimes I wish I was a kid again. Check out some of my things too! Not all of my stuff is great but I would like some peoples opinions. Thanks! :)

Keep writing!