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March 19, 2010
By Whisperer PLATINUM, O&#39Fallon, Illinois
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Whisperer PLATINUM, O&#39Fallon, Illinois
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I&#039;d rather be hated for who i am, than loved for who I&#039;m not~Anonymous<br /> <br /> No individual has any right to come into and out of this world without leaving distinct and legit reasons for having passed through.~Anonymous

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Don’t worry mommy
Don’t cry for me
I’m stronger now
You see

Don’t worry mommy
I’m still the same
I’m still your baby
That won’t ever change

Don’t worry mommy
They won’t hurt me again
I’m stronger now
Than I was back then

I love you mommy
No matter what
And I just want you
To know that much

I love you mommy
I won’t let go
And I’m trying real hard
Just to let it show

That I’m finally trying
To just be me
And I love you mommy
Please don’t cry for me

And mommy when you see me
Struggling so hard
Don’t help me in the struggle
Just let me do my part

And when I really
Need your help
All that I ask is that you
Listen to me

I love you mommy
And daddy too
I’m glad you had me
I love you too.

The author's comments:
i've seen my mom cry many times for my sake. some good, some bad. i don't want to see my mom cry because she is sad because of my choices. that's what inspired this piece
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Whisperer PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 28 2010 at 8:34 pm
Whisperer PLATINUM, O&#39Fallon, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
I&#039;d rather be hated for who i am, than loved for who I&#039;m not~Anonymous<br /> <br /> No individual has any right to come into and out of this world without leaving distinct and legit reasons for having passed through.~Anonymous

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it always seems as if we disappoint our parents when we try to just live and be ourselves. :( and sometimes when you see others weak, you can't help but feel weak yourself.

thank you for commenting :)

Vivallaa PLATINUM said...
on May. 22 2010 at 11:13 am
Vivallaa PLATINUM, NYC, New York
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Wow, I think we're clones or something. My mom is always crying too. My stepdad doesn't cry though. But the only difference is, is that she's trying to convince me to not weaken for her
Whisperer PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 8 2010 at 3:54 pm
Whisperer PLATINUM, O&#39Fallon, Illinois
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I&#039;d rather be hated for who i am, than loved for who I&#039;m not~Anonymous<br /> <br /> No individual has any right to come into and out of this world without leaving distinct and legit reasons for having passed through.~Anonymous

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thanks. that's basically what inspired it. i saw my mom crying. glad you enjoyed it :)
DaniW PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 7 2010 at 11:30 pm
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This is so sweet and sincere! :) I think like this when my mom cries. I showed it to her and she loved it too !