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March 18, 2010
By cheetoz45680 DIAMOND, Bridgeport, Connecticut
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i dont know whats going on,
but i cant help feeling this way,
my heart controls my mind,
and i with agony there i lay,

this is beyond my fears,
its something that overpowers me,
something that i cant control,
and to my heart you have the key,

i didnt want this,
and now i suffer day after day,
i walk by you with a smile,
but i dont get even a simple "hey",

im inpatient,
im losing my mind,
how do i know if what i feel is right?
how do i know if im who you are trying to find?

i cant take it any longer and so im gonna say how i feel,
but your looking at me as if what i feel is something rare,
as if love was from another planet,
and then i realize that you never really did care,

even though im deeply inlove,
ill have to deal with this pain,
it feels like the end of the world,
but this fight i must obtain

you will be a scar in my life,
but what i did i will never regret,
and my feelings for you are still strong,
even though im a little upset

© Brianna D., Everson, WA

The author's comments:
this poem is about a girl that has fallen inlove for the first time. she doesnt know how to control and later she realizes it cant be controled. she is someone who had the courage to stand up to her love and say what she felt. even though the guy has rejected her she still has strong feelings for him. but she will never regret what she has done.
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cheetoz45680 DIAMOND said...
on Jun. 21 2010 at 6:06 pm
cheetoz45680 DIAMOND, Bridgeport, Connecticut
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your welcome!
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD said...
on Jun. 14 2010 at 9:10 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
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\&quot;either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin<br /> <br /> \&quot;If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\&quot; <br /> <br /> \&quot;If music be the food of love, play on.\&quot;

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thank you so much!!! that means alot!!!
cheetoz45680 DIAMOND said...
on Jun. 7 2010 at 7:21 pm
cheetoz45680 DIAMOND, Bridgeport, Connecticut
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yeah it was really good

 

Egyptiangirl13 GOLD said...
on Jun. 6 2010 at 3:33 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
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\&quot;either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin<br /> <br /> \&quot;If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\&quot; <br /> <br /> \&quot;If music be the food of love, play on.\&quot;

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thanks!! did u like it?
cheetoz45680 DIAMOND said...
on Jun. 6 2010 at 1:42 pm
cheetoz45680 DIAMOND, Bridgeport, Connecticut
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but i read something of urs
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD said...
on May. 25 2010 at 3:46 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
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\&quot;either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin<br /> <br /> \&quot;If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\&quot; <br /> <br /> \&quot;If music be the food of love, play on.\&quot;

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thank you but my work isn't posted yet-it will probably b this week or next week
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD said...
on May. 25 2010 at 3:46 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
\&quot;either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin<br /> <br /> \&quot;If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\&quot; <br /> <br /> \&quot;If music be the food of love, play on.\&quot;

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thup yet it thanks but its not posted yet-i have five poems that should come out this week though
cheetoz said...
on May. 25 2010 at 1:13 pm
cheetoz, Bpt, Connecticut
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hey thankyou, ima take a look at your writing and tell you what i think nd thanks again.
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD said...
on May. 17 2010 at 8:13 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
\&quot;either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin<br /> <br /> \&quot;If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\&quot; <br /> <br /> \&quot;If music be the food of love, play on.\&quot;

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this is wonderfull!!!! Keep writing!!!!