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His. . .

March 11, 2010
By Loveandboxing PLATINUM, Levvitwon, Pennsylvania
Loveandboxing PLATINUM, Levvitwon, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Eat, Sleep, Sing (by me)<br /> Writing is an art few people master it. -me


His hair,
So amazingly cut,
Like a movie star.

His eyes,
So . . . nutty,
In a good way of course.

His smile,
Makes me freeze,
From head to toe.

His voice,
Is petrifying,
To a girl as love sick,
As me. . .

His face,
In my mind or in person,
Is hypnotizing.

He is my major crush.
His name is. . .
NOT TELLING


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on Oct. 24 2011 at 4:02 pm
Wow this is so nicely written! I Love it!!

on Apr. 1 2010 at 12:58 pm
Loveandboxing PLATINUM, Levvitwon, Pennsylvania
29 articles 0 photos 70 comments

Favorite Quote:
Eat, Sleep, Sing (by me)<br /> Writing is an art few people master it. -me

thxs ur awesome <333

on Apr. 1 2010 at 12:58 pm
Loveandboxing PLATINUM, Levvitwon, Pennsylvania
29 articles 0 photos 70 comments

Favorite Quote:
Eat, Sleep, Sing (by me)<br /> Writing is an art few people master it. -me

thxs i LOVE this one

on Apr. 1 2010 at 12:57 pm
Loveandboxing PLATINUM, Levvitwon, Pennsylvania
29 articles 0 photos 70 comments

Favorite Quote:
Eat, Sleep, Sing (by me)<br /> Writing is an art few people master it. -me

thxs so much this is SO about my BF

 


on Mar. 31 2010 at 4:04 pm
xLoVeLyCuTiEe428x PLATINUM, Nanuet, New York
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;To me, Fearless is not the absense of fear. It&#039;s not being completely unafraid. To me, Fearless is having fears. Fearless is having doubts. Lots of them. To me, Fearless is living in spite of those things that scare you to death.&quot; <br /> &mdash; Taylor Swift

this is soooooooo cute.

i think this piece is amazzzing.

good job. <333


on Mar. 30 2010 at 6:59 pm
xBaByGiRrL22x PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;The goal isn&#039;t to live forever, but create something that will.&quot;<br /> &quot;If you wanna go, baby let&#039;s go; if you wanna rock, I&#039;m ready to roll.&#039;&#039;<br /> &quot;No one ever said it&#039;d be easy. They just said it&#039;d be worth it.&quot; &lt;3

aww this is soo cutee. i waznt expecting the last part @ allso i guess dats my favorite part ;)) it makes it all the more powerful. amazing job, u've definetly got talent!!!

on Mar. 30 2010 at 6:45 pm
thoughtfulsoul PLATINUM, El Cajon, California
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I love this poem! I liked how you describe how different aspects of a guy can drive a girl crazy and I liked how you separated each description. Oh and the ending is cute :)