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love is what you make it

February 5, 2010
By futurejournalist SILVER, Richland, Georgia
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They say they love you
They say they'll never lie
They say your my everything
But
I say show me how much you love me
Show me you'll never lie
Show me how you really feel
Dont be afraid
Forget about eveyoneelse
And what they tell you about love
Love is what you make it
Not what your told
So show me your love
Show me what love is
How loving you can be
I'll be waiting for you

© Kristy K., Milford, CT

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this piece was inspired by my old relationships
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futurejournalist SILVER said...
on Jun. 16 2010 at 5:24 pm
futurejournalist SILVER, Richland, Georgia
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thank you.!
sarahcarp63 DIAMOND said...
on Jun. 13 2010 at 2:26 pm
sarahcarp63 DIAMOND, Denver, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
&#039;The really important people in life have a way of coming back to you&#039;<br /> &#039;Good enough isn&#039;t good enough&#039;<br /> &#039;You don&#039;t have to be sick to get better&#039;<br /> &#039;Come what may and love it&#039;

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Your so right and this is a beautiful poem!
futurejournalist SILVER said...
on Feb. 25 2010 at 6:51 pm
futurejournalist SILVER, Richland, Georgia
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thnxsz

so very much
INnaturegirl said...
on Feb. 24 2010 at 7:15 am
god SO true :D

i love this