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When it rains...

January 29, 2010
By brittneyh SILVER, Chicago, Illinois
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brittneyh SILVER, Chicago, Illinois
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Your destination isn&#039;t mapped out for you by someone. You map out your destination not only for yourself, but by yourself. -Brittney Harvey<br /> <br /> &amp;&amp;. It&#039;s much easier to run when you&#039;ve got something to chase.

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When it rains.

I think of you.

When it rains,

I think of all the pain and agony that i went through for you, just to be with you.

When it rains...

It pours for real

I remember the time you told me i couldn't be the girl for you.
Then i realized what you said was affirmative.

When it rains,

it never stops. It just starts to pour even harder, because i'm starting to think of you...harder.

When it rains...

it really doesn't. It's just my tears, falling...

© Cerys W., Marblehead, MA

The author's comments:
I don't know what to say about this poem. I made this up in less than 5. So if it's really bad, then you should know why.
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