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Sickness

December 7, 2009
By Kelly_Blake BRONZE, Oakland, New Jersey
Kelly_Blake BRONZE, Oakland, New Jersey
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Seven times in the morning I greet the sun
Streaming in thru the cracks between the curtains
Snooze button, snooze button, snooze button again
It's nearly 8:30 when I pull myself up

Six times downstairs I check the pot
Which won't even bubble when I glance its way
Hiss, hiss, whistle, steam
Why bother with a kettle when it's only for one?

Five times in the car I nearly cry
on the thirty minute drive from my home
Sniffle, sigh, honk, swerve
Maybe I'm to much on automatic

Four times in the lot I want to give up
I say I'm to old for all of this pain
Step forward, backward, forward again
The truth is I am to young

Three times in the lobby I look at my watch
I wonder if they can tell I don't want to be here
Tick, Tock, Tick, Tock
I sign my name with a pen made of bricks

Two times at your room I knock at the door
And my tired bones echo more then the wood
Knock, Knock, Click, Creak
There's no turning back now

One time a day I see your face
And can hardly believe that it really is you
Why, am, I , here
If your glassy eyes look right through mine?


The author's comments:
My aunt often visits her mother in a nursing home, and she often describes it as emotionally draining to see her mother slip further away each day. That was the main inspiration for this poem.

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on Jan. 19 2010 at 2:27 pm
AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
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This poem has great flow and insight.<br /> I really enjoyed it.<br /> Lovely poem darling =]<br /> -Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-<br /> XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx

This poem has great flow and insight.

I really enjoyed it.

Lovely poem darling =]

-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-

XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx

on Jan. 18 2010 at 11:08 pm
justkasey SILVER, Oak Grove, Missouri
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&quot;These violent delights have violent ends And in their triumph die, like fire and powder, Which as they kiss, consume.&quot; -William Shakespere (Romeo and Juliet)

This is fantastic. Very clever the way you go from 7 to 1. Keep writing!!