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You're Dead

December 7, 2009
By Azure GOLD, Lake Oswego, Oregon
Azure GOLD, Lake Oswego, Oregon
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You’re dead
I never really knew you
You went to my elementary school
But you were a year older than me
So I never really talked to you
I don’t think you had many friends
Maybe that’s part of it

But you were in eighth grade
You were only a year older than me
I saw you yesterday
You were laughing with a friend
You seemed happy

But I guess you weren’t very happy
Because you took your own life
And I guess I know why
I could tell you felt alone in the world
Using past tense feels so strange

I don’t know why
But it hurts me
And I’m sorry


The author's comments:
I wrote this about an eighth grade boy that went to my school. He recently committed suicide, and it made me cry for hours.

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on Jan. 19 2010 at 2:51 pm
AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
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This poem has great flow and insight.<br /> I really enjoyed it.<br /> Lovely poem darling =]<br /> -Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-<br /> XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx

This poem has great flow and insight.

I really enjoyed it.

Lovely poem darling =]

-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-

XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx

Lily said...
on Jan. 18 2010 at 7:37 pm
Oh my gosh, that is so sad and good! I'm sorry for your loss