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it was all the same

December 19, 2009
By Rosalie PLATINUM, Maryville, Tennessee
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-you have many to learn but nothing to lose.<br /> -the hardest thing to do is watch the one you love, love someone else...<br /> -good girls are bad girls that dont get caught.

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It took me awhile to realize this.


But it was all the same thing.

The words that were flowing out of his flawless lips..
telling me he didn't love me anymore..


the same words that promised me he loved me.

The same lips that said he loved me.

The same heart I gave all of my trust.



The heart that was made to break mine.

It was all the same.

I feel like an idiot.

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Pillow BRONZE said...
on Jan. 14 2010 at 10:05 pm
Pillow BRONZE, Spokane, Washington
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Nothing says oops like a wall of flame.

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your welcome.
Rosalie PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 14 2010 at 10:04 pm
Rosalie PLATINUM, Maryville, Tennessee
48 articles 0 photos 100 comments

Favorite Quote:
-you have many to learn but nothing to lose.<br /> -the hardest thing to do is watch the one you love, love someone else...<br /> -good girls are bad girls that dont get caught.

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thanks! I'll submit a longer version if i have time!
Pillow BRONZE said...
on Jan. 14 2010 at 9:49 pm
Pillow BRONZE, Spokane, Washington
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Nothing says oops like a wall of flame.

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I thought it should've been longer too.

I liked it.
Rosalie PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 10 2010 at 4:21 pm
Rosalie PLATINUM, Maryville, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
-you have many to learn but nothing to lose.<br /> -the hardest thing to do is watch the one you love, love someone else...<br /> -good girls are bad girls that dont get caught.

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thank you thank you thank you!
dan_wills07 SILVER said...
on Jan. 10 2010 at 9:10 am
dan_wills07 SILVER, Fort Wayne, Indiana
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True, true. What a very nice poem, young lady. This is very good. 5 stars!
Rosalie PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 10 2010 at 4:51 am
Rosalie PLATINUM, Maryville, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
-you have many to learn but nothing to lose.<br /> -the hardest thing to do is watch the one you love, love someone else...<br /> -good girls are bad girls that dont get caught.

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Thanks for the comment!

True..Maybe I really should!
wishing4thebest2day GOLD said...
on Jan. 9 2010 at 1:02 pm
wishing4thebest2day GOLD, Redmond, Washington
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&quot;Giving will ultimately make you happier in life. It is rewarding for you to brighten up someone&#039;s day.&quot; -Anonymous

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That is so real.... I wish you described it a little longer so I can learn more about it.