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Will you keep me?

December 5, 2009
By Poetic_Mind PLATINUM, West Monroe, New York
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&quot;A woman&#039;s heart should be so lost in God, a man needs to seek him in order to find her.&quot;<br /> &quot;It is never the end, Just a chance for a new beginning.&quot;

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Your eyes are such a lovely shade of beauty,
so deep, so rich,
so amazing, so extraordinary.

How can they hold me,
Keep me,
take me,
leacve me.

They hold me,
Like I wish you would,
They keep me,
like you could.

They take me,
to places I didnt know possible,
They leave me,
breathless gasping for more.

But you will not hear these words,
escape my lips,
because I cannot find them,
when your beautiful eyes,
land on mine.

© Stephanie F., Garnerville, NY

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Everything I wish for but dont see happening.
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justsimplyaubree said...
on Jan. 9 2010 at 5:19 pm
haha, good job chica :)
bamboom212 PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 4 2010 at 2:56 pm
bamboom212 PLATINUM, Chestnut Ridge, New York
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wow. u hav amazing talent. i luv this