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December 3, 2009
By LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
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LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
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Whoever laughs first has the sickest mind.

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Put my wish in your pocket,
And then take it out.
A key is what you see.
Now unlock my heart
And fix it.
Because I don’t want it
To bleed.

© Martha V., Morton Grove, IL

The author's comments:
idk... i was bored. my broken heart just never seems to heal. the only one who can fix it is him. i'll be scarred. :(
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JohnDeereGirl DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 21 2010 at 8:58 pm
JohnDeereGirl DIAMOND, Westerlo, New York
61 articles 36 photos 216 comments

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&quot;I&#039;d rather be hated for who I am, than loved for who I&#039;m not&quot; <br /> &quot;Somewhere betweeen us talking, you saying I deserve better, and you making me laugh when I wanted to cry, I fell in love with you.&quot;

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You said so much by saying so little. It was perfect!
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 21 2010 at 4:51 pm
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
54 articles 2 photos 748 comments

Favorite Quote:
Whoever laughs first has the sickest mind.

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Thankyew. :D
-JustDance- PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 20 2010 at 5:11 pm
-JustDance- PLATINUM, Medford, Oregon
23 articles 0 photos 28 comments

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&quot;The manner in which we live and that in which we ought to live are things so wide asunder that he who quits the one to betake himself in the other is more likely to destroy than to save himself.&quot; ~Niccolo Machiavelli<br /> <br /> So let us find the balance.

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This is so simple, and yet it doesn't need to be any longer. This gets right to the heart of it. truly beautiful
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND said...
on May. 9 2010 at 11:08 am
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
54 articles 2 photos 748 comments

Favorite Quote:
Whoever laughs first has the sickest mind.

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yeah sure :) and thanks for YOUR feedback :)
Boosflash DIAMOND said...
on May. 7 2010 at 8:31 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
55 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

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What the front door.

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very very nice-your work is filled with emotion...would you please read the works of insaneprincess-she could use the feedback and I'm sure you'd enjoy it....