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Endless Ride

November 4, 2009
By izz123 GOLD, Gaithersburg, Maryland
izz123 GOLD, Gaithersburg, Maryland
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If only there were a bus,
One that never stopped.
With long rows of gleaming windows,
For riders to look out of,
And dream, just a bit.
And if only that very bus,
Had a few murky windows too,
For the riders who want to see nothing,
To think and feel nothing, just a bit.

And if only that bus
Drove on forever,
At times, speeding around the bends,
For those who want a thrill,
Or to get away from someplace quick.
If only that bus rode through,
Nice and slow at times.
For those who need to relax,
Or slow down, and forget.

And that bus,
It'd go on forever,
But the driver'd make plenty of stops,
For those ready to get out,
And for those who need to.
He'd pick up lots too.
'Cause there will always be people,
Who need to ride this forever bus,
If only for just a bit.


The author's comments:
I thought up this poem when coming home on the schoolbus one day. I hope you enjoy it.

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on Dec. 17 2009 at 6:36 pm
...irie... BRONZE, Which I Left In The Mnts, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Some look at things that are, and ask why. I dream of things that never were and ask why not?" -George Bernard Shaw

Thanks for commenting on my piece of work! I really really really love this poem of yours. It's a new way of thinking about a nice way..to please eveybody in civilization.haha we all have the murky window days,and of course we allhave the slow winding days..ha I thin Ill join you your next busride;) keeeppp writinggg!

izz123 GOLD said...
on Dec. 6 2009 at 9:07 am
izz123 GOLD, Gaithersburg, Maryland
13 articles 5 photos 24 comments
Thanks so much. :)

on Dec. 4 2009 at 2:05 pm
L@L@girl PLATINUM, Traer, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
If there's a book you really want to read, but it hasn't been written yet, then you must write it. ~Toni Morrison

I really liked how you got your inspiration, and I did like the poem. I liked the part about the murky windows! :P

on Nov. 18 2009 at 2:50 pm
AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
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This poem has great flow and insight.<br /> I really enjoyed it.<br /> Lovely poem darling =]<br /> -Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-<br /> XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx

This poem has great flow and insight.

I really enjoyed it.

Lovely poem darling =]

-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-

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ylkjslkfjag said...
on Nov. 17 2009 at 9:24 am
I liked the idea behind this poem but it didn't flow very well