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October 29, 2009
By literaryaddict PLATINUM, Albuquerque, New Mexico
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literaryaddict PLATINUM, Albuquerque, New Mexico
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&quot;We&#039;re almost there and no where near it. All that matters is that we&#039;re going.&quot; Lorelai Gilmore, Gilmore Girls<br /> &quot;The whole theory of modern education is radically unsound.&quot; Lady Bracknell, The Importance of Being Earnest, Oscar Wilde

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White marble eyes, staring out into space,
Blank of all expression, all emotion,
A curious tilt of her head,
A serene smile playing upon the corners of her lips,
A snapshot of her life,
Of one moment lost forever in time,
Capturing all of her beauty, but none of her feeling,
Capturing all of her expression, but none of its meaning,
Capturing all but the thoughts in her mind,
Capturing all but the secrets she carries in her heart,
A tangible Mona Lisa.

The author's comments:
Inspiration: the statues shown in the hall at Pemberley from the 2005 "Pride and Prejudice"
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literaryaddict PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 23 2010 at 10:14 pm
literaryaddict PLATINUM, Albuquerque, New Mexico
23 articles 3 photos 157 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;We&#039;re almost there and no where near it. All that matters is that we&#039;re going.&quot; Lorelai Gilmore, Gilmore Girls<br /> &quot;The whole theory of modern education is radically unsound.&quot; Lady Bracknell, The Importance of Being Earnest, Oscar Wilde

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sorry to be a bother, but do you think i should also submit my poem "inpsiration"
literaryaddict PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 23 2010 at 5:04 pm
literaryaddict PLATINUM, Albuquerque, New Mexico
23 articles 3 photos 157 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;We&#039;re almost there and no where near it. All that matters is that we&#039;re going.&quot; Lorelai Gilmore, Gilmore Girls<br /> &quot;The whole theory of modern education is radically unsound.&quot; Lady Bracknell, The Importance of Being Earnest, Oscar Wilde

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ok i will thanks
ShernayB. DIAMOND said...
on Feb. 22 2010 at 9:25 pm
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
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Yes, by all means. This is beautiful and deserves to be published and deserves recognition from all kind of readers. So, submit it. I'm rooting for ya!
literaryaddict PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 22 2010 at 8:22 pm
literaryaddict PLATINUM, Albuquerque, New Mexico
23 articles 3 photos 157 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;We&#039;re almost there and no where near it. All that matters is that we&#039;re going.&quot; Lorelai Gilmore, Gilmore Girls<br /> &quot;The whole theory of modern education is radically unsound.&quot; Lady Bracknell, The Importance of Being Earnest, Oscar Wilde

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one question for you: i'm thinking abotu submitting this to my school's literary magazine. do you think i should? is it good enough? thanks.
ShernayB. DIAMOND said...
on Jan. 23 2010 at 6:00 pm
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
62 articles 1 photo 881 comments

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&quot;Some things will never change&quot;---Tupac

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Whoa.

This is beautiful.

I love the first line.

Its so descriptive.