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Loves Lasts Fornever

October 8, 2009
By Maddie Hearn SILVER, Lake Oswego, Oregon
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Our hands intertwined
Me, completely lost in him
He completely lost in me
His golden hair in the sun
Mine waving blissfully in the wind
Smiles genuinely worn on our faces
The feel of his rugged shirt
Against my chest as we hug
“The cutest couple” they whisper in jealousy
He told me our love was forever
It ended yesterday.

© Michelle B., Blairsville, GA

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emilja45 said...
on Jan. 3 2010 at 1:37 pm
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oh is that why you are frustrated? sweetie, have you seen a psychiatrist?
pandaLICIOUS SILVER said...
on Oct. 18 2009 at 11:45 am
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OH MY GOD!!! GOOD JOB!!! I LOVE IT!