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Blood stained Bliss

September 19, 2009
By Titan12339 SILVER, Bellbrook, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"I dwell in chaos, for love is madness." Jason Storm, son of Chaos god of darkness and madness In a Camp Half Blood RP.

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The blood stained
walls surround me
as well as the pool
of her blood
also mixed with mine
myvision is blurred
the tears fell from
my face and only
added to the pool
of sorrows at my feet
why had this happened
I had lovered her
hadn't I?
yes, i had
I would have
given my life for her
and tonight would be
no different
I take the knife
to my heart
and as my hot
confessions pour out
adding to the sorrows
I feel none
but bliss
as i came to her
In death
In a Blood stained bliss

© Zoelle M., Boston, MA

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SaintJamesHallow PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 19 2010 at 12:56 am
SaintJamesHallow PLATINUM, Sequim, Washington
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Excellent post, I really like the gruesomeness of it all and the confusion in the voice
Babygurl_101 SILVER said...
on Dec. 8 2009 at 10:40 am
Babygurl_101 SILVER, N/A, California
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Angels are the quiet girls that just havent been noticed yet&quot;<br /> &quot;The past is the past, and i am your futuer.&quot; (&lt;3&lt;3&lt;3&lt;3&lt;3)

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hehe, no problem, u did really good, keep writtiing!!!! i just got another poem online, chek it out if u can, and let me kno
Titan12339 SILVER said...
on Dec. 7 2009 at 7:43 pm
Titan12339 SILVER, Bellbrook, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;I dwell in chaos, for love is madness.&quot; Jason Storm, son of Chaos god of darkness and madness In a Camp Half Blood RP.

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thank you thats what i was going for =P
Babygurl_101 SILVER said...
on Dec. 4 2009 at 10:02 pm
Babygurl_101 SILVER, N/A, California
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Angels are the quiet girls that just havent been noticed yet&quot;<br /> &quot;The past is the past, and i am your futuer.&quot; (&lt;3&lt;3&lt;3&lt;3&lt;3)

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wow, that was deep, but really good!!!