You said | Teen Ink
  1. Home
  2. Poetry
  3. Free Verse
  4. You said

You said

September 3, 2009
By JohnDeereGirl DIAMOND, Westerlo, New York
More by this author
JohnDeereGirl DIAMOND, Westerlo, New York
61 articles 36 photos 216 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I&#039;d rather be hated for who I am, than loved for who I&#039;m not&quot; <br /> &quot;Somewhere betweeen us talking, you saying I deserve better, and you making me laugh when I wanted to cry, I fell in love with you.&quot;

View profile

You said you would "always" be there for me.
You said I was "beautiful". You said I was the "best thing" that ever happend to you.
You said you "loved" me.
You said you "cared".
Why did you lie?

© Stephanie F., Richmond Hill, ON, Canada

The author's comments:
I know this sucks but i just wrote the fisrt thing that came into my head. please comment even if you say it sucks.. ty :-)
Post a comment
Submit your own

Similar Articles

Previous Next
Poetry
I hate splash water on the lack of there-forth
By Anonymous
Poetry
Death At Your Door
By sHaDoWnInJa PLATINUM
West Jordan, Utah
sHaDoWnInJa PLATINUM, West Jordan, Utah
31 articles 0 photos 3 comments
View profile
Poetry
Perfectly
By Christina Rudolph BRONZE
Lilburn, Georgia
Christina Rudolph BRONZE, Lilburn, Georgia
2 articles 0 photos 0 comments
View profile
Poetry
Joys of Life
By Daniel Seeley Hicks-Neal BRONZE
Westville, New Jersey
Daniel Seeley Hicks-Neal BRONZE, Westville, New Jersey
1 article 0 photos 0 comments
View profile
Poetry
I want a guy...
By grlgotgame BRONZE
Chillicothe, Ohio
grlgotgame BRONZE, Chillicothe, Ohio
4 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Girls with butts like mine, don&#039;t talk to boys with faces like yours.&quot;

View profile
Poetry
The Backyard
By CarlyG GOLD
Emmaus, Pennsylvania
CarlyG GOLD, Emmaus, Pennsylvania
10 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Never let the odds keep you from doing what you know in your heart you were meant to do.&quot; H. Jackson Brown Jr.

View profile

JOIN THE DISCUSSION

This article has 6 comments.

JohnDeereGirl DIAMOND said...
on Mar. 21 2010 at 8:36 am
JohnDeereGirl DIAMOND, Westerlo, New York
61 articles 36 photos 216 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I&#039;d rather be hated for who I am, than loved for who I&#039;m not&quot; <br /> &quot;Somewhere betweeen us talking, you saying I deserve better, and you making me laugh when I wanted to cry, I fell in love with you.&quot;

View profile
Thank You Very Much!
shelterisland GOLD said...
on Mar. 20 2010 at 8:15 pm
shelterisland GOLD, Montclair, New Jersey
14 articles 0 photos 175 comments

Favorite Quote:
-Biting&#039;s excellent. It&#039;s like kissing only there&#039;s a winner.&quot;-Doctor Who, The Tardis

View profile
i thought this was pretty good. it didn't suck at all! :)
JohnDeereGirl DIAMOND said...
on Sep. 22 2009 at 5:47 pm
JohnDeereGirl DIAMOND, Westerlo, New York
61 articles 36 photos 216 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I&#039;d rather be hated for who I am, than loved for who I&#039;m not&quot; <br /> &quot;Somewhere betweeen us talking, you saying I deserve better, and you making me laugh when I wanted to cry, I fell in love with you.&quot;

View profile
Thank You! I am going to check out "you Say" right now :)
JohnDeereGirl DIAMOND said...
on Sep. 22 2009 at 5:45 pm
JohnDeereGirl DIAMOND, Westerlo, New York
61 articles 36 photos 216 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I&#039;d rather be hated for who I am, than loved for who I&#039;m not&quot; <br /> &quot;Somewhere betweeen us talking, you saying I deserve better, and you making me laugh when I wanted to cry, I fell in love with you.&quot;

View profile
Thank You very much :) ! I am working on more longer less suckinsh ones.
choirchic101 SILVER said...
on Sep. 19 2009 at 8:27 pm
choirchic101 SILVER, Norwalk, California
9 articles 0 photos 196 comments

Favorite Quote:
in order for God to use all of you you have to be completely broken

View profile
it was amazing. i wrote something similar. its calledd You Say. you should check it out. it didn't suck. it was good for the first thing that came to your head.
JenniferB. SILVER said...
on Sep. 19 2009 at 1:30 pm
JenniferB. SILVER, Harvey, Louisiana
6 articles 0 photos 88 comments
View profile
This doesn't suck at all, honestly, it was short, sweet, and to the point you expressed your true feelings