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Letter to a Savior

November 17, 2023
By Worker_bee7756 DIAMOND, Toledo, Ohio
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Worker_bee7756 DIAMOND, Toledo, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"I know I'm forgetful but I still feel things and I try to make sure others don't feel those things" -Ghostbur

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I’m okay,

Just want something to do,

Tearing this paper is devastating,

My walls aren’t listening anymore,

Self evidence is a path of proximity,

Apart from the scrutiny,

I don't know if I can do this anymore,

Can see a light,

Hold a little hope,

On top of the ribbon,

But if its a sunday,

Not a memory can be made,

For a moment I try,

Much more time has gone by,

Longer and longer it feels in this hole,

Help my family move on.

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Look at the first word of each line.

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