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I am a Sculptor MAG
I am a sculptor
with quick and helpful hands
shaping my poetry (slowly)
to what I want it to
look like
sculpting my mind
onto paper
pushing around my dreams
until they fit in order,
the perfect shape.
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to what I want it to
look like"
Having the "look like" on another line is incredibly tacky. It stops the reader in their tracks and makes them spew. But putting it in the line above gives it a great sense of dictation and dicipline.
Otherwise, its fantastic, and I really reccomend you keep going.
<3
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