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The Captain

May 20, 2023
By EmilyChen GOLD, Shanghai, Other
EmilyChen GOLD, Shanghai, Other
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I sealed everything.
Glue things together, making every broke structure clear,
so people coming to see can experience
and clearly remember the shipwreck.
 
Scaled down 500 times in real size,
every speck on the steel frame,
every monstrous crease on the broken wooden
bars corroded by seawater is like a wrinkle on an old man's face,
telling every story of his experience.
Even the failures, setbacks, and wounds are so worthy of being remembered.
 
I am preserving all of them.
Not allowing the evanescence of worldly affairs
to slip away.
 
The people on deck, the shipwrecked, the survivors,
I didn't portray any of them.
No Jack,
Nor Rose.
The only mark they showed on me was
the deformed bow of the ship.
 
But for one man, I portrayed with all of my care.
For the the old man, the captain,
who died in wheelhouse,
and who was holding the rudder of the ship 
in the last seconds
before the glass broke and the cold water rushed into his lungs
deprived him of his breath.
 
I put him and his story in a glass bottle.
Vacuumed so he wouldn't be weathered,
shielded, isolated from the outside world,
so the sea water that rushed
into the cockpit with the broken glass would not hurt him.
 
He was sacrificed with his beloved ship, his mission.
But his heart, his purity, should be preserved.


The author's comments:

This is an anthem to the old captain of the Titanic. In this poem I tried to break the stereotype that people think of Jack and Rose's tragic love story when they think of the Titanic. Why don't we look back at the old captain who lived and died with his beloved ship? While watching the Titanic movie, I saw the man who locked himself in the wheelhouse when the ship was about to sink to the bottom. The seawater around him slowly inundate the huge glass window. Finally broke through him and swept him away along with his life in a flash. Such poignancy, such grandeur, made my eyes filled with tears.

 

Emily Chen is a 10th grader from Shanghai, China. Her interests span literature, gender studies, and economics. She is committed to promoting gender equality and has posted some book reviews and creative writing through social networks. Her work has been recognized by New York Times. She likes to travel, listen to music, and paint pictures. 


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