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“Hello, Hello?”

November 30, 2022
By devindockery05 BRONZE, Evansville, Indiana
devindockery05 BRONZE, Evansville, Indiana
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“Hello, Hello?”

A boy cries out in a dark room.

His mother sits stiff in a chair,

Her husband stands beside her, hand on her shoulder.


“Hello, Hello?”

The young boy calls for his Mama.

But there was no answer,

Only a cold silence…


“Hello, Hello?”

The young boy calls for his Papa.

There is an answer this time:

Through the door outside the room.


“Hello, Hello?

Papa! Where are you?”

The boy crawls to the door, but his mother whips out at him:

“Stay still, brat! The outside is not safe for you.”


“Hello, Hello?

Papa, Mama’s hurting me!”

The father bangs on the door, but it doesn’t budge.

“Papa, papa! I can’t do this anymore.”


There is silence.

Dark, cold silence.

Deafening silence.

The boy has not cried out.


Papa bursts through the door,

The boy lays still on the ground.

The woman, “Mama” no more, looks down at the scene.

The man beside her does not move.


Papa takes up the boy in his arms,

Warmth spreads throughout the room.

Outside there is light,

It fills the dark room, blinding the man and woman.


The boy’s eyes open, he looks up at his Papa,

“Hello, Hello.”


The author's comments:

My name is Devin, I was 17 at the time of writing this. As a young child I faced abuse and manipulation from my biological mother and step-father. This went on for many years, up until I was almost twelve. It got to the point I was in a deep pit, debating my own death and suffering. Up until I was rescued by my biological father. I wrote this as a way to reflect on my past, on how far I've come in the past 7-8 years. I wrote this so that those who might also have struggled or might still be struggling the way I had could maybe relate and hopefully find peace or comfort.


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Afra ELITE said...
on Dec. 9 2022 at 8:44 am
Afra ELITE, Kandy, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"A writer must never be short of ideas."
-Gabriel Agreste- (Fictional character- Miraculous)

I was almost in tears when I read this...Devin, I am sorry for everything that happened in your life, but in the end, you've made it through those challenges and that is what's most important...Leave the past in the past and cherish all those beautiful moments...
Wishing you all the best...Keep writing, Devin!!!