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Her Promise
Crying in the bathroom
She can’t take it anymore
She reaches for her blade
And feels the cut against her skin
She feels something finally
Another form of pain
The slit feels better than anything
Then the sting of realization
Hits her harder than ever before
She cut her wrists
Over the wrong scar
She bleeding and it wont stop
She reaches for her phone
She doesn’t wanna die
Mom doesn’t know
What her men do
So she texts her boyfriend
In spite of her promise
“I love you with my body, heart, and soul to death”
He doesn’t care
She feels pain in her chest
She’s gasping for air
She can’t reach it
She’s too far deep
And then he’s here
He’s screaming “Somebody call an ambulance!”
Drifting in and out I go
I’m suddenly surrounded by whiteness,
A hospital
She doesn’t know what’s happened
Is it a murder scene?
It hits her hard
She realizes she broke it
She broke her promise
She broke his heart..
Then she’s gone
And the life is taken out of her
All because of a blade
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I'm currently 13 years old, but am a very talented writer and love to do it. This is also kind of based on the song Baby Don't Cut by Bmike, and how I think the girl reacted to him making her promise.