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Lonely Sleep

January 19, 2022
By LiteraryMe PLATINUM, Dayton, Ohio
LiteraryMe PLATINUM, Dayton, Ohio
41 articles 19 photos 519 comments

Favorite Quote:
“The earth has music for those who listen.” —William Shakespeare


Pulling back the curtains,

Streams of light fill the room.

Fingers run across a surface,

A dusty bunny hops away.

Soon this room,

Once filled with noise,

Shall fall silent;

Sleeping ‘till someone makes,

A single sound.

A laugh,

A song,

A word,

A cry,

A sound to keep the room alive.

Although, for now,

The room lies still.

The only movement,

A single tear,

Staining the muddy carpet,

Shoes once destroyed.

 No longer will those steps,

Clomp across the floor.

No bags and jackets in a heap,

No longer will you have to leap,

To get in through the dented door.

Soon this room,

Once filled with light,

Shall become,

Dark as night.

Asleep until someone makes,

A spark,

A flame,

A soft small light.

Someone please,

I beg of you,

Come into this room.

Shine the light,

Make the sound,

Bring the room to life.

It waits for you,

To wake it from,

Its lonely sleep.

Its dark and silent,

Lonely sleep.



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on Aug. 24 2022 at 10:41 am
LiteraryMe PLATINUM, Dayton, Ohio
41 articles 19 photos 519 comments

Favorite Quote:
“The earth has music for those who listen.” —William Shakespeare

Thank you so much!

on Aug. 23 2022 at 1:19 pm
LotsOfChocolateCherries PLATINUM, Portland, Oregon
26 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be who you are and say what you feel, because those who mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind."

This is a beautifully written piece, and I love the part "Soon this room, once filled with light, shall become, dark as night"

on Feb. 26 2022 at 1:41 am
Rsnail-925 PLATINUM, Boulder, Colorado
29 articles 11 photos 106 comments

Favorite Quote:
A story has as many versions as it has readers - Winter Of Our Discontent

Congratulations on the editor's choice, I love the way this poem is written! I love how it's not all rhyming. The theme of the poem Is also great in my opinion. It reminded me of an abandoned house that's near my location.

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on Feb. 15 2022 at 1:46 am
Afra ELITE, Kandy, Other
103 articles 7 photos 1824 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A writer must never be short of ideas."<br /> -Gabriel Agreste- (Fictional character- Miraculous)

Good work getting this in editor's choice...