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These I Can’t Promise (These I Can Promise Response Poem)

June 11, 2021
By KellyLau PLATINUM, Burnaby, Columbia
KellyLau PLATINUM, Burnaby, Columbia
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I can’t promise you endless fits of Balenciaga

I can’t promise you Gucci or Prada

I can’t promise you pools of champagne or a sea of diamonds

I can’t promise you strawberry covered lips on a private island 

I can’t promise you dry eyes and few stacks of pillows

I can’t promise you promises carved in willows

I can’t promise you kisses at midnight

I can’t promise you whispers by moonlight 

I can’t promise you the one thing you do dream of 

I can’t promise you my love


The author's comments:

This is poem is a modern version of Mark Twain's poem, These I Can Promise. 


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