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Kind Love

October 14, 2019
By Ash_Hope BRONZE, Stockton, California
Ash_Hope BRONZE, Stockton, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Our greatest fear isn't that we are inadequate, our greatest fear is that we are powerful beyond measure."


When the sun sets
tonight in the sky
im reminded by what i see inside 

inside, on the outside
I see something new
Something different
something for once, not blue

But Red, blood red
Not filled with hate or anger
but with love
Kind love

And I wonder
Do you see it too?
Or rather..
Can you feel it?

Thumpity thump 
it goes
Thumpity thump
it grows

do you feel it?
the warmth
the sizzle
of kind love's burn?

it's special
but new
it's fragile
yet old

is it just me?
am I delusional
do i not know
when to feel happy?

are you even ready
to hear those words?
to see the light?
to be free?

Let's be friends
if all else fails
friendship..
never gives up
And neither do I.


The author's comments:

I'm always looking for a new friendshp, and while writing I like to be more involvede with emotions and I want people to feel it, so I wrote this to show the reader how deep kind love goes and what it feels like.


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on Oct. 24 2019 at 9:23 pm
Ash_Hope BRONZE, Stockton, California
3 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Our greatest fear isn't that we are inadequate, our greatest fear is that we are powerful beyond measure."

@TianX Wow, thank you! And yeah, what did you have in mind?

TianX BRONZE said...
on Oct. 23 2019 at 10:41 pm
TianX BRONZE, Manchester, New Hampshire
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Favorite Quote:
Live For Others.

This is a beautiful piece about friendship!!! Would you like to submit it to somewhere else also?