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No Control

April 18, 2017
By greentea3664 PLATINUM, Dublin 4, Other
greentea3664 PLATINUM, Dublin 4, Other
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It started off as a mist
A slight blurriness.
Then it thickened
And began to swirl.
Fog. Dark. All around me.
Enveloping me
Not able to breathe.
I freeze. Can’t move.
It swirls into every crevice
Drifts into all available space.
Soon it has surrounded me
Has taken my control from me.

But I have no white flag.
I can’t surrender.
But I want to.
Oh, how I want to.


Anxiety.



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on May. 1 2017 at 12:10 pm
CrossBow PLATINUM, Harlem, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
Death is not the greatest loss in life. The greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live.<br /> https://www.brainyquote.com/quotes/quotes/n/normancous121747.html

You're welcome, I use to have it, but I was able to get over it. And that's good it always helps to put these things into writing.

on Apr. 28 2017 at 12:55 pm
greentea3664 PLATINUM, Dublin 4, Other
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Thank you @CrossBow ! I have anxiety myself so I was able to use my experiences.

on Apr. 27 2017 at 12:07 pm
CrossBow PLATINUM, Harlem, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
Death is not the greatest loss in life. The greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live.<br /> https://www.brainyquote.com/quotes/quotes/n/normancous121747.html

That was deep, but very good! You're talented and should continue to write! If you had gotten voted #1 i would've understood.