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Jerk MAG
January 2, 2009
I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.
I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,
you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.
I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill
the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.
© Colton D., Lubbock, TX
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sumthingspecial BRONZE said...
on Mar. 20 2009 at 8:22 pm
cute and funny
LusciousKitten SILVER said...
on Mar. 20 2009 at 8:14 pm
Love it but i think u could use more imagery to get the reader into it more but other than that itz really good
Pie said...
on Mar. 19 2009 at 11:37 pm
I would use less end stopping, it makes the rhyme scheme too predictable. Also, use more images and less abstractions, show, not tell.
silver said...
on Mar. 14 2009 at 8:34 pm
i love it is very nice, awesome rhymes keep om writing
whatwehavelost said...
on Mar. 14 2009 at 7:57 pm
its nice to know someone feels the same.guys can be jerks but "love isnt loving the perfect person,its about loving the unperfect person perfectly" it was really cute!everyone has a jerk and i wish you luck with yours:)
tweedle dee said...
on Mar. 13 2009 at 11:02 pm
really cute.
Jenelle Brazier said...
on Mar. 13 2009 at 5:50 pm
This is really really cute! I can relate to this poem because it's about someone i hold close to me too.
Laura Rowe said...
on Mar. 13 2009 at 5:49 pm
This poem is freaking cute. I can relate to this poem because I feel the same way about someone.
CABhahahahaHPhahahaTLhaha GOLD said...
on Mar. 9 2009 at 9:47 am
Guess we all fall 4 the ones we shouldnt, oh well as long as we love loving them
Emo_Supergurl BRONZE said...
on Mar. 8 2009 at 7:39 pm
OMG that matches one of the guys in my class =)
rockmysoxoff25 BRONZE said...
on Mar. 8 2009 at 4:26 am
love it(:
your really good
your really good
pianoplayer BRONZE said...
on Mar. 7 2009 at 1:42 am
I really like this poem =] Nice Job =]
vb*playa*37 said...
on Mar. 7 2009 at 1:34 am
This is REALLY good! Your an amazing writer!!! [=
yourstrulyhalle(= said...
on Mar. 7 2009 at 12:15 am
girl, i know exactly how you feel (= i loveeee thisss !
carrie aalberts BRONZE said...
on Mar. 6 2009 at 6:56 am
i love this poem!
i can totally relate:]
i can totally relate:]
Melissarae9590 GOLD said...
on Mar. 4 2009 at 6:10 pm
Awh! This is a very cute poem(:
I love it!!
I love it!!
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