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Silver Dollar Moon

March 2, 2009
By TaylorLynn GOLD, Ray City, Georgia
TaylorLynn GOLD, Ray City, Georgia
10 articles 1 photo 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;You have enemies? Good. That means you&#039;ve stood up for something, sometime in your life.&rdquo;<br /> Winston Churchill


Everything's tumbling and falling;
To the,
Ground
Ground
Ground

The silent buildings sneer;
They make no,
Sound
Sound
Sound

They ugly people pass and they,
Frown
Frown
Frown

My life reflects in a puddle,
Watch it
Drown
Drown
Drown

A bird flaps its wings;
See it,
Fly
Fly
Fly

A tiny little speck in the
Sky
Sky
Sky

The buildings tower above,
Oh so,
High
High
High

As a street corner girl lets out a
Sigh
Sigh
Sigh

She leans on one hip,
Shifting her position
and looks up at the bruise-blackened sky ,
taking her breath;
See it echo in her eyes,
the silver dollar moon and the stars wave goodbye



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on Jun. 10 2011 at 6:50 pm
TaylorLynn GOLD, Ray City, Georgia
10 articles 1 photo 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;You have enemies? Good. That means you&#039;ve stood up for something, sometime in your life.&rdquo;<br /> Winston Churchill

Thank you so much for your comment! I agree I love it!

Hover BRONZE said...
on Jun. 10 2011 at 6:05 pm
Hover BRONZE, Mukwonago, Wisconsin
2 articles 0 photos 85 comments

Favorite Quote:
Sophistication isn&#039;t what you wear or who you know<br /> Or pushing people down to get you where you wanna go<br /> They didn&#039;t teach you that in prep school, so it&#039;s up to me,<br /> But no amount of vintage dresses gives you dignity.<br /> ~Taylor Swift<br /> *Defy Gravity!*

I loved the repeating words. It made it almost... haunting... I love it!!!!!!!!

Good

Job

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Hee hee!!!! :D