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Love

February 11, 2009
By KaylaAnne GOLD, North Platte, Nebraska
KaylaAnne GOLD, North Platte, Nebraska
16 articles 0 photos 42 comments

Love is cruel,
Love is kind

It takes you in and gives you a home,
but pushes you out and leaves you alone

Love hurts,
Love lives

Love will give you reason to live
Love will take your reason away

Love frowns
Love smiles

Love leaves you standing in the rain with a
smile
on you face
Love steels your smiles and leaves you with a
frown

Love bleeds
Love shines

Love will give you happiness
Love will snatch your happiness away

Love scares
Love scabs

Love leaves you with the best memories
Love leaves you in pain over these memories


The author's comments:
Love will make you happy, and then it will hirt. But, hey, that's life.

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Ciara Murch said...
on Apr. 16 2009 at 8:44 pm
Ciara Murch, Buffalo, New York
0 articles 1 photo 6 comments
That was cute and sweet keep it up and u will be a *[Star]

on Mar. 30 2009 at 7:35 pm
Taylor.Sangria GOLD, Deltona, Florida
10 articles 27 photos 24 comments
Nice concept, nice imagery. Second stanza is my favourite.

on Mar. 30 2009 at 5:13 pm
YeseniaG SILVER, Livonia, Michigan
7 articles 1 photo 122 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is what happens when you're busy making plans.

good work one spelling error but good concept

on Feb. 28 2009 at 8:49 pm
hey this is really good. thanks for saying ur luv my work.

KaylaAnne GOLD said...
on Feb. 24 2009 at 6:13 pm
KaylaAnne GOLD, North Platte, Nebraska
16 articles 0 photos 42 comments
Thank you! Please remember to rate my work, thanks again!

on Feb. 24 2009 at 2:42 am
eternal*sunshine SILVER, Seabrook, Texas
6 articles 0 photos 11 comments
Very good. I like the contrast, especially how you say love leaves you with memories that are at once wonderful and terrible. Nicely done.