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The Sky Has Eyes
April 14, 2015
the sky has eyes
irises dance with clouds
watch the people cry
buildings crumble and fall
irises dance with clouds
Christmas in the grass
buildings crumble and fall
red and green, red
Christmas in the grass
the sky weeps for ghosts
red and green, red
when it drizzles it storms
the sky weeps for ghosts
watch the people cry
when it drizzles it storms
the sky has eyes
© Jillian K., New City, NY
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This article has 2 comments.
SpeareShaker SILVER said...
on Apr. 15 2015 at 12:51 pm
Thank you so much for the great advice!
BeautyWhispers PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 15 2015 at 10:58 am
It's great, but maybe try to make it flow better and use more words that rhyme. But other than that I luv the story you've somehow spun between these words: beautiful.
Pantoum poem.