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You Said That You Loved Me...
January 18, 2009
You said that you loved me,
that you always would;
that we were connected,
together for good.
You were my whole life,
my one wish come true;
my life would be nothing,
if it was without you.
But then you broke my heart,
you took your’s back;
I cried and I begged,
that you wouldn’t pack.
You said that you loved me,
that you always would;
that we were connected,
together for good.
© Lauren G. Pompton Plains, NJ
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This article has 9 comments.
chocolet said...
on Jul. 7 2009 at 9:45 pm
this is great, don't stop writing your, you have talent.
Carrie said...
on Jun. 28 2009 at 5:48 pm
Jared thats awesome!!!!!!
Lucretia said...
on Feb. 14 2009 at 12:43 am
Great! Strikes a deep cord within the heart!
Betty Joy said...
on Feb. 14 2009 at 12:27 am
Fantastic, this boy has trememdous talent! Keep the poetry flowing!
Tlittle said...
on Jan. 31 2009 at 2:39 pm
Awesome poem look forward to reading more from you. You have been blest with great writing skills!! Keep it up
Maria said...
on Jan. 30 2009 at 12:27 pm
What a beautiful inspiration you have!
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There was just one grammatical error I saw: 'your's' should be 'yours'