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December 11, 2008
By PK4evr ELITE, Allen, Texas
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PK4evr ELITE, Allen, Texas
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When life gives you lemons, make grape juice, then watch everyone wonder how you did it!

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My heart is made of glass,

and it already shattered.

My heart is a million pieces on the ground,

and it hurts.

My feelings are now more vulnerable then ever.

I can't take this life anymore.

That's the end of it.

The author's comments:
“That’s the end of it” both signifies the end of the poem and “that’s the end of it- the end of story, all I have to say.” It wasn’t meant to be a long poem, just a tiny little excerpt that has some hidden meanings.
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andshesfearless GOLD said...
on Jan. 27 2010 at 8:01 pm
andshesfearless GOLD, West Harrison, New York
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when the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace.<br /> -jimi hendrix-

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ohmygod. this is like how i am right now.
PK4evr ELITE said...
on Sep. 17 2009 at 11:00 pm
PK4evr ELITE, Allen, Texas
105 articles 5 photos 107 comments

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When life gives you lemons, make grape juice, then watch everyone wonder how you did it!

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Basically, it has dual meaning: That's the end of life and that's all I have to say. -Natalie
ShernayB. DIAMOND said...
on Sep. 5 2009 at 10:06 am
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
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&quot;Some things will never change&quot;---Tupac

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Short. So what! I think its really good. I love that you could put meanings into something so short Great job!
PoetryIsLife BRONZE said...
on Aug. 24 2009 at 7:29 pm
PoetryIsLife BRONZE, Newark, Delaware
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The people you need in your life are the ones that need you in theirs

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Short and Sweeet ^_^ i loved it this is going on my fav lists if thats okay!
GlassHeart SILVER said...
on Jul. 24 2009 at 9:45 pm
GlassHeart SILVER, Black Earth, Wisconsin
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Good job! Very sweet.
Kelly Johnson BRONZE said...
on Jul. 24 2009 at 8:25 pm
Kelly Johnson BRONZE, Silver Spring, Maryland
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girlzrool1992 GOLD said...
on Jul. 24 2009 at 2:58 pm
girlzrool1992 GOLD, Chittenango, New York
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&quot; no one can make you feel inferior with out your consent&quot; E. Roosevelt

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its so sad but its very good 0.O
Torrzilla GOLD said...
on Jun. 27 2009 at 2:07 am
Torrzilla GOLD, Ames, Iowa
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^_^ This is very good.
awesomeaugust GOLD said...
on Jun. 26 2009 at 9:22 pm
awesomeaugust GOLD, Boston, Massachusetts
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&quot;Keep your eyes on the stars and your feet on the ground&quot;<br /> ~Theordore Roosevelt

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I liked it a lot, all around!
out.of.hope said...
on Jun. 26 2009 at 6:41 pm
i like it. does 'that's the end of it' mean that's the end of life?
Kinnery SILVER said...
on Jun. 25 2009 at 9:01 pm
Kinnery SILVER, London, Ontario, Other
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I feel like you're trying too hard to seem deep and broken. Show the reader, don't tell the reader. Keep writing!
Amber1994 GOLD said...
on Jun. 5 2009 at 1:07 am
Amber1994 GOLD, Roanoke, Illinois
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I like it, but it seems like somthing is missing because of the abrupt ending. But i love the beginning and middle parts! it has great emotion and feeling.
ShernayB. DIAMOND said...
on Jun. 4 2009 at 5:20 pm
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
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I like it! It's short and sweet....I really like the idea of it being an excerpt. It has a lot of meaning to it and I could feel it. Great job!



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DoctorWho BRONZE said...
on Jun. 4 2009 at 12:38 pm
DoctorWho BRONZE, Sandy Hook, Connecticut
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In the beginning the Universe was created. This has made a lot of people very angry and been widely regarded as a bad move. <br /> -Douglas Adams

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Great poem!I liked the, My heart is made of glass and it already shattered part and it seemed even better the second time through. Keep up the good work!
TheOtherGuyFromAllen221 said...
on Jan. 24 2009 at 7:33 pm
i see that you made it onto the polpular list several times. good job. keep posting. see ya around town.
Joy26 said...
on Jan. 17 2009 at 2:39 am
I really like it! First time through I thought it was kind of morbid - "I can't take this life...it's the end" but it's actually kind of sweet, like you're putting it all behind you and welcoming a brand new start. Nice job!