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Down.

May 19, 2014
By ashlynn17 SILVER, Alice, Texas
ashlynn17 SILVER, Alice, Texas
8 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
Keep calm and swim on.


I can't stop the tears from
escaping my eyes,
I am getting tired of all
of your lies.
You say I'm fat,
yeah, I know that!
You say I am ugly too,
well what else is new?
There is no relief from this pain,
I know,I am going to loose this
game.
Maybe,then I'll be free,
from all that trouble me.
You need to let go before it;s too late,
because I can't change my fate.
The room is spinning now,
I'm going down.



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on May. 24 2014 at 8:07 pm
ashlynn17 SILVER, Alice, Texas
8 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
Keep calm and swim on.

Yeah!!!!! :)

on May. 24 2014 at 4:54 pm
WOWriting SILVER, Broadstairs, Other
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Good point :) yeh big bang theory is great!

on May. 23 2014 at 6:56 pm
ashlynn17 SILVER, Alice, Texas
8 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
Keep calm and swim on.

It has been a bit over used...bit everyone has a different story. And that's awesome! Big bang theory is just amazing.

on May. 23 2014 at 4:34 pm
WOWriting SILVER, Broadstairs, Other
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You've written this beautifully and I can relate to feeling fat, but I got over trying to diet after a while. My only critisizm is that this seems a bit used and lots of people have written similar pieces. Still really like this tho.   PS - I looked at ur faves and i love two and a half men too, i watch it pretty much every night!! and i used to love reading harry potters and the big bang theory is so funny. YAY - (im watching big bang theory now)